In many countries, young people leave rural areas to study or work in cities. What do you think are reasons of these? Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
These days it seems that more rural young people are a migration to urban areas than ever before. Under 30 years old people think that cities offer more opportunities. I would argue that the overall impact of this trend has in fact been negative. Some of the primary drawbacks associated with this issue are as follows.
First of all, it is an indisputable fact that the city has more job possibilities than the rural area. People who live in villages can just work as a teacher, doctor or peasant. Moreover, life degree and an amount of salary is considerably low than the city. For example, in Kazakhstan doctor who works in villages ambulance earn 100-150 dollar per month while city hospital surgery or therapist’s salary is about 1000 dollars. Consequently, students do not to come back their villages after the university for 100 dollars. Another contributing factor that is more developing countries tend to pour more money to built modern architectures in cities and organize summits, sports events. As a result, the rural area population suffers and villages’ life level is decreasing.
Unfortunately, this trend is a tremendous stroke for the country and the whole world. This influx leads to overpopulation and pollution in cities. Moreover, the city is not balloon and has an area limit. If the number of inhabitants in the city goes up, the government faces with dwelling and staple problems. As a result, the poverty level enhances in the country. Even more disturbing fact that nation GDP deteriorates since rural area offers staples such as drain and meet.
To sum up, the challenges presented by the leaving the rural area are numerous and complex. This trend aggravates nations economy, therefore, the authority must salvage and open more work places in the rural area.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, for example, in fact, such as, as a result, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1506.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07070707071 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82749307556 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599326599327 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.967501507 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.2631578947 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6315789474 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.10526315789 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150903900391 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0443932485328 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0436439481455 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.096067756047 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0321256084441 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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