Nowadays consumer goods are cheaper to buy. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
Consumers in these days could buy cheaper items thanks to advanced technology in goods production and fierce competitions between manufacturers on the market. While I understand that the decrease in goods prices might have some drawbacks, I would argue that it has more benefits.
On the one hand, a reduction in goods prices has several disadvantages. First, because of lower prices, many companies managed to generate profits by excessively cutting their production cost, which might impair the quality of their products. For examples, manufacturers could reduce cost by purchasing raw materials of inferior quality or ignoring some vital steps in manufacturing processes. Second, in case the prices significantly go down, many companies, especially small and start-up ones, could suffer from serious losses, perhaps even go bankrupt. As a result, consumers’ choices are limited due to the decrease in the number of suppliers on the market.
On the other hand, there are several reasons why buying goods at lower prices benefits citizens. The first reason is that since goods prices are more affordable, impoverished families find it easier to make ends meets. If essentials items such as bread and vegetables remained high in price, the lives of poor families would become increasingly difficult. Additionally, spending less on consumer goods, citizens could save up more money to expend on other extra services, which undoubtedly help them enjoy more comfortable lives. For instance, last month I spent my savings on traveling to enjoy the stunning landscape of Bana Hill, which does really refresh me after days of stressful working.
In conclusion, while the decrease in good prices might have some disadvantages, I believe that its advantages are greater.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, really, second, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1498.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44727272727 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93127902019 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.650909090909 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.0925593823 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.230769231 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1538461538 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.15384615385 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118454700439 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0455953013055 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0496924717921 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0866061079003 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0460111454006 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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