Some people think that there should be some strict controls about noise. Others think that they could just make as much noise as they want. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
People have different views about how free citizens are to create noise. While some people think that they have the freedom to make noise as they like, I would argue that it is better to strictly control noise.
On the one hand, there are several reasons why some people like to make as much noise as they want. First, some people are really into hobbies which make much loud noise. For example, people having an obsession with rock music want to turn the volume louder so as to fulfill their music passion, although this act might disturb their neighbors. Second, since people often consider noise as an integral part of industrialization and modernization, noise becomes normal and unavoidable. Traffic and engine noises become increasingly familiar to urban citizens. Hence, people in cities feel that there is no particular reason to control noise.
On the other hand, I believe that it is more beneficial to impose strict control over noise. One reason is that noise could have an adverse impact on people’s health. For instance, some of my friends find it difficult to sleep and toss and turn all night because of intrusive sounds from a nearby industrial zone. If this situation lasts for a long time, they might suffer from a deterioration in mental and physical health. Additionally, noise also negatively influences the study of school children as loud music and vehicle noises distract them from attentively learning. As a result, children would receive unexpected results at school.
In conclusion, while some people prefer to make much noise without any consideration for others, I believe that noise should be limited to generally guarantee a better living environment for people.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, if, really, second, so, while, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1430.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12544802867 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65798583204 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.598566308244 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.6445841684 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.3333333333 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.370141643605 0.244688304435 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120015705673 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106871663157 0.0667982634062 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.236412198183 0.151304729494 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0943612438918 0.056905535591 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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