Nowadays consumer goods have become the most important part of people’s lives.
Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
Undoubtedly, final goods have become the main characteristic of modern lifestyle. As a result, there is an argument over the issue of whether this new trend has been more positive or negative. Although some people laud the convenience it has brought to lives, from my standpoint, their detrimental impacts on both the individuals and society are far more considerable.
First of all, it is an undeniable fact that purchasing consumer goods to excess culminates in a laziness among the individuals who never did experience sedentary lifestyle in such extent in the past. Diseases such as obesity, high blood pressure and cardiovascular problems have boosted recently, as the result of putting work to be done by final goods such as washing machine and microwave. Admittedly, life wouldn’t as convenient as now if consumer products didn’t reach this dominance, which are the symbol of a more affluent life. The aforementioned consequences as well as other predicaments such as lack of concentration (made by recreational products such as TV), nonetheless, undermine the sparse disadvantages.
Even more disturbing, though, final products exert a negative influence over society. Taking a materialist approach to the life, people put a noticeable value on purchasing the most luxury goods which are available at the markets to enhance their social status. Thus, there has been a completion among members of society to shoe their prosperity and stand out on every crowd. Due to this attitude, financial issues are going to be the pivot on which happiness turns, leading to serious mental disorders such as anxiety and depression.
By way of conclusion, buying consumer products is a prevalent trend which cause physical and mental problems for not only the individuals, but also society. Hence, in my opinion, its drawbacks overshadow the few upsides.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, nonetheless, so, thus, well, such as, as a result, as well as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1574.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37201365188 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11124677456 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627986348123 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.8995626132 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.076923077 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5384615385 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.15384615385 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155567674826 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0485812147507 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.045688719384 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0838652324663 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0407934409574 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.69 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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