Nowadays the crime rate is increasing especially among teenagers. what are the reasons behind it, How can be reverse their trend? what punishment methods should be in your opinion.
Rising crime has become the global menace in this contemporary world. Presently, majority of the young people are involving themselves in crime activities. Here, I would like to account it's reasons along with it's solutions.
Manifold reasons are there to support my point of view. First and foremost, hectic schedule of parents one of the main reason of this worrying concern. To illustrate, parents have to work round the clock in order to earn two square meal. They are unable to spend quality time with their children and give social and moral values. Youngsters join bad companies in the absence of parents. They have less fair of doing crime. Apart from it, crime related programs also responsible of this phenomenon. For example, young people watch programs in order to reduce their loneliness and learn distinct methods of doing crime .furthermore, unemployment, inflation, are rising in every nook and corner and young find hard to earn bread and butter.They try wrong ways such as kidnapping, robbery and many others of earning. Thus crime rates between young generation is escalating day by day.
Some remedial measure can be mentioned. Initially, guardians must spend some time with their children and confer social and moral values so that they become a noble character rather than criminal.parents also pay some attention on their Children's companies. Therefore, they can safe their children from crimes. Furthermore, government must put outlaw on those programs which depicts crime. Moreover, government should pay attention on poverty, inflation, population so that teenagers keep themselves away from crime activities.
To recapitulate, Undeniably, the level of punishment is defined by the sort of crime. However, still I believe that keeping immaturity of youth generation in mind is advisable before penalisation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, thus, apart from, for example, sort of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1561.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43902439024 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8206301252 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630662020906 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 64.8188184432 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.1578947368 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1052631579 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.47368421053 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155239028669 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0464231157421 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0326206912798 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0860496445663 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0227970677572 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.68 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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