Nowadays, education quality is very low. Some people think that we should encourage children to evaluate and criticize their teachers, others believe that it will result in a loss of respect and discipline in the classroom. Discuss on both sides
Over years, there has been a widespread assumption that students should be entitled to rate their educational qualities, especially in terms of educator, while some think that it is a disrespectful activity happened in school. From my point of view, while the latter is true in some cases, doing the former also brings some advantages to some extent
On the one hand, feeling free to give opinions about school instructors brings some benefits. The reason for this is that giving these opinions help children to express their feelings and thoughts, leading to the characteristics of confidence. This eventually gives them a vibe of satisfaction, which is the main factor contributing to an increase in academic results. Another reason is that by collecting feedback from their students, teachers will have a better view of their weaknesses making them to continually improve their teaching qualities. This gradually creates a better educational environment, which produces more and more refined graduates and attracts lots of exchange students
On the other hand, it cannot be denied that some evaluation expresses a disrespect attitude towards their teachers. In fact, some of these feedbacks are usually subjective which is due to their disliking of that subject. This criticism, however, creates a hatred environment destroying a healthy relationship between children and their instructors without giving any improvement. Another reason is that these opinions could possibly affect the career of a teacher, leading to a reduction in salary. For example, in universities, there have been many professors being fired because of a decrease in rating by collective surveys from students.
In conclusion, in my point of view, it is necessary for students to raise their voices about their teaching qualities, however, this should be done properly to avoid disrespectful situations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, so, while, for example, in conclusion, in fact, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1600.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49828178694 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99370903478 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567010309278 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.795708511 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.454545455 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4545454545 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.09090909091 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14689808049 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.054850989767 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0397241929657 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.093198721153 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0235599009141 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.0946893788 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.92 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.76 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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