Nowadays, many animal species are becoming extinct. Some people believe that countries and individuals must solve this problem, others believe that human beings are more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
There is a controversial topic that whether humans should join hands in protecting endangered animals or we need to prioritize well-being’s benefits. While I agree that it is important to appreciate people’s lives, I would argue that it is also necessary to prevent animal species from dangerous circumstances.
To begin with, there are some understandable reasons why the human species need to be taken care of. Firstly, due to discovering and researching the causes of the extinction, human- beings might have to struggle with many potential dangers such as the threat of toxic and brutal wild animals. More importantly, these explorers have to sacrifice their stable life and safety to face those problems, which could not be predicted previously. Secondly, saving extinction animals also require a huge investment in terms of equipment and human resources, which many poor and developing countries could not afford. Having said that, these citizens might deal with difficulties such as the poor healthcare system or education if these nations invested more budget in this aspect.
However, I would argue that this problem needs to be solved by humans for some compelling reasons. The most significant reason is that some animals possess unique and special features, which could help people escape from fatal diseases such as cancer or the poor bone structure in the elderly. This means protecting endangered animals plays a pivotal role in our lives to support humans’ better lives. Moreover, climate change and the food chain are impacted hugely by certain wild animals. Therefore, the disappearance of a particular creature could affect directly the well-beings’ survival. As a result, it is undeniable that saving other species also helps to protect our humans’ lives.
In conclusion, although the safety of the human species is vitally important, tackling the extinction-related problem is also the responsibility of different nations and citizens all over the world.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1688.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46278317152 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9795123681 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608414239482 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6441774266 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.571428571 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0714285714 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0714285714 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232605111299 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0787008865233 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0436581831176 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133699305565 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0285275834356 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.84 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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