Nowadays many countries have very cosmopolitan cities with people from all over the world. How can the government ensure that all these people can live together harmoniously?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
Nowadays, multinational countries are becoming more common, than they used to be a few decades ago, There are humans from all over the world, who live in cities of this cosmopolitan countries. Staying in the way of this process, governments should ensure that all these people live with each other in peace. This essay will first consider the main reasons of people migrating around the world and then discuss how governments can be convinced that people live in cities harmoniously.
It is clear that the main causes of migrating are the history of regions and availability of travelling around the world. Some countries have conquered regions of different nations in the past. It led to spreading the languages and customs of these countries and, eventually, it has impacted on current days. For instance, there is a diversity of different nations in Manchester and the priority of them are nations that were conquered by England in the past.
Multinational cities are becoming a big issue in safety and governments around the world must be ensured that people live in peace. It is said that governments should integrate the languages of the majority nations into official languages of countries to prevent disputes and they also should organize surveys to understand what could be done to protect different nations. For example, there are many official languages in Switzerland that is being taught at school and, moreover, the government always analyses the feedbacks from citizens about this diversity of languages. It leads to understanding by citizens that they are all equal.
Overall, countries are becoming more cosmopolitan these days and it is vital for governments to intervene in the safety of people and ensure that humans live in harmony.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, moreover, so, then, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1481.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19649122807 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80589012447 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.487719298246 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.7690850814 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.416666667 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.75 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.16666666667 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298579653336 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107397211639 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0756979009604 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182936750762 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0984370855305 0.056905535591 173% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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