Nowadays many countries have very cosmopolitan cities with people from all over the world. How can the government ensure that all these people can live together harmoniously?
In today's era, many people moving towards cities for jobs and to live luxurious life across the globe. However, it is the government's responsibility to provide an appropriate environment for city dwellers to survive peacefully in society. In this essay, we will discuss the effective steps that the government should initiate for that.
First of all, the authorities have to understand the basic needs of people who are living in city areas. In other words, facilities such as wider roads, shelter, availability of water, gutter, employment and so on must be provided to all by using tax payer's money. In addition to this, they should make strict rules and regulations for both local and outsiders regarding to maintain law & order in cities which everybody has to follow compulsory and also breaking of rules must be a punishable offence. Moreover, they can install cameras on roads which can be advantageous for not only control the traffic but also to keep eyes on hooligans in case of emergencies.
Furthermore, as people of the city areas belong to many religion and different culture, the government can arrange free seminars and training programs to create awareness among people which generate the goodwill in them. Besides, They can arrange numerous competition for all age group people to bring many people together on the same platform to increase friendship. Ultimately, Surveys related to various issues or facilities must be carried out by the government to collect the feedback from residents which becomes crucial for improvements in society.
In conclusion, by providing amenities, jobs and assistance to people, the government can deliver balanced lifestyle but it is also individuals responsibility to maintain the relationship with each other and should support the authorities to establish unity in the society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 123, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'governments'' or 'government's'?
Suggestion: governments'; government's
...fe across the globe. However, it is the governments responsibility to provide an appropriat...
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Line 5, column 52, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun religion seems to be countable; consider using: 'many religions'.
Suggestion: many religions
..., as people of the city areas belong to many religion and different culture, the government c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, well, as to, in addition, in conclusion, such as, first of all, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1552.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33333333333 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92671000452 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611683848797 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.5178476254 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.090909091 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4545454545 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.1818181818 7.06120827912 201% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277861552881 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106739919143 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0815668823186 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155349333766 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0704169688395 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.81 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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