Nowadays many countries have very cosmopolitan cities with people from all over the world. How can the government ensure that all these people can live together harmoniously?
Recently, Cosmopolitan cities have people from all around the world who have different religious cultures, characteristics, etc. The government should take necessary measures for m1aintaining harmony among all the people. Because lack of harmony will create hatred among people and this will result in chaos in cities. I think that the Government has to create rules and create a peaceful environment to maintain harmony.
The government should amend new rules to create a better society in cities. Without law, people will be inclined to have hatred to others from different cultures places. There will be discrimination against non-local residents of the city. This can be diminished by creating laws for punishing people who cause any discrimination against others. To illustrate this let us take the example of India. India consists of people from many different cultures and places. To maintain harmony and create a safer society law was passed through Article 15. Under Article 15 the government punishes anyone who discriminates or ill-treats will be punished severely. Article 15 contributed a major part for creating a harmonious relationship among people in India.
The government needs to create opportunities in working places for people from all over the world. Any rule passed should not be based on any caste, religion, region, etc. This develops a feeling of being treated equally. We can take the USA as an example. The recent rules made by the current president are helping the Americans to live a better life it’s making the life of non-americans difficult to live. With Indians being the majority of the non-local residents this created hatred between Americans and Indians. This resulted in many incidents of Indians being killed by Americans. This led to a non-harmonious living among people. This resulted in Indians not preferring America as an option for living. So, the government should be thoughtful of creating any new rules so that the present harmony should not be disturbed.
In conclusion, the government needs to pass strict rules to protect people from being ill-treated. It should also be very cautious when passing new laws into society so that harmony is not disturbed.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, as to, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1871.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30028328612 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85436034563 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.498583569405 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 577.8 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0721442886 156% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.9295376863 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 74.84 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.12 20.7667163134 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.92 7.06120827912 27% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236616699307 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0725425575016 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0754636760077 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162140199625 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0539776707764 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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