There are various ways to earn for living, including being employees of someone else's company and also being self-employed. These days, a lot of people do not want to be an employees of corporations anymore. Otherwise, they decide to be self-employed. This essay will discuss the reasons why this situation happens, and also the possible drawbacks of this situation.
There are some reasons that makes people consider to quit from being employees. Firstly, being an employee lacks time flexibility. This is because, the vacation days for employees are very limited and also employees have fixed working schedule. This is different from being a self-employed, where people can decide by themselves about their working schedule and day-offs. Secondly, employee often gets pressure from the boss. This makes doing a job becomes so stressful. Moreover, as our position in a company rise, we will have more pressures and demands from our bosses. On the contrary, a self-employed person have no pressure from bosses because they are their own bosses in their own businesses.
However, there are several possible downsides of being self-employed. Firstly, people who choose to be self-employed have to be ready to bear all of the risks and consequences that may happen to their businesses continuity. This is different from being an employee, because employees only do the ordered tasks and because they do not own the company, they will not totally be responsible for business continuity. Next, being self-employed have bigger risk to be failed and to get unstable income than to be an employee. This is because, an employee has fixed income from the company, while being self-employed usually fails at first and may get no or minimal income at first.
In conclusion, a lot of people decided to be self-employed because of several advantages including having more time-flexibility and not having pressure from bosses. However, there are also possible drawbacks to consider including to be ready to bear the risks and consequences related to their businesses continuity, and the possibility to fail and have unstable income.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 171, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an employee' or simply 'employees'?
Suggestion: an employee; employees
...days, a lot of people do not want to be an employees of corporations anymore. Otherwise, the...
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Line 3, column 42, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[3]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'consider quitting'.
Suggestion: consider quitting
...here are some reasons that makes people consider to quit from being employees. Firstly, being an...
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Line 5, column 143, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
... self-employed have to be ready to bear all of the risks and consequences that may happen ...
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Line 5, column 646, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...oyed usually fails at first and may get no or minimal income at first. In concl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, in conclusion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 13.1623246493 213% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1788.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27433628319 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98256784779 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.463126843658 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 545.4 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.9030945355 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.1052631579 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8421052632 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.73684210526 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.414655551944 0.244688304435 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.158446035618 0.084324248473 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10590010233 0.0667982634062 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.288105531324 0.151304729494 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0983659292777 0.056905535591 173% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.99 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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