Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation.
Why might this be the case?
What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?
Today, the number of people who prefer to work as self-employed is increasing. They like to have their company instead of work for other organizations.
Nowadays we see some information about successful people who changed many things in the world. TV programs and online websites are full of biographies about entrepreneurs that they built their companies and they are very successful, such as Steve Jobs or Bill Gates while these sites or programs never give information about thousands of startups that they failed. Furthermore, many companies have bad conditions for working and many employees can not continue with their job with these conditions, They prefer to have their companies with favorite conditions and facilities. In addition, many employees do not earn a good salary from their job. They believe they can earn more when they have own organizations.
However, if a study hard about startups and has good experience in this field, he/she may develop a successful organization but people usually take a decision about work as self-employed then they work on it without study and explore, so they fail and waste their time, money and lose their job too. An unsuccessful startup can also destroy people motivation and self-confident. They will think they are not good enough for any career.
To sum up, work as self-employed and building own company is a dangerous decision but it can be a success and effective if people study about it and work hard.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 188, Rule ID: AS_ADJ_AS[1]
Message: Comparison is written "as self-employed 'as'".
Suggestion: as
... a decision about work as self-employed then they work on it without study and explo...
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Line 7, column 161, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...if people study about it and work hard.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, so, then, while, in addition, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1233.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 241.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11618257261 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88017023615 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560165975104 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 371.7 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 84.5201330605 49.4020404114 171% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.090909091 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9090909091 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.18181818182 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180208847837 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0816328708619 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0718115245628 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151422549441 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0737862394961 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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