Nowadays many people choose to be self employed rather than to work for a company or organisation Why might this be the case What could be the disadvantages of being self employed

Essay topics:

Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?

Self-employment has become increasingly popular in the last few years because of individuals wanting to become self-reliant. This essay will discuss the possible causes of the recent situation and some disadvantages of becoming self-employed.

Lower salary from the private organization coupled with more workload in the company might be the cause of the above problem. These days market competition exists among companies, resulting in a pile-up of tasks in the office; however, salary has not risen to match up with the increased work burden. Consequently, workers are not satisfied with the salary that leads to more chances of quitting the jobs.

On the other hand, being self-dependent comes at a great cost. In other words, being be-holden to oneself has some drawbacks. Firstly, owning own business requires a lot of careful plans and decisions. Failure to fulfill these requirements not only will make a business fail in achieving its goals but also degrades the motivation of the owner. This will have detrimental consequences in an individual's life. Secondly, one needs to take greater risk to run own private firm. Calculated risk can be viable, nevertheless, unwanted risk can pose a great threat. Thus, higher risk and failure to act properly can have a disastrous effect on the verge of being self-employed.

In conclusion, a growing number of task pressure and unsatisfactory income can cause an employee to get rid of currently working organization and choose to work for oneself. However, it has a number of cons: unmanaged risk and dearth of careful plans that can often lead to a dead end.

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Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 392, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...ill have detrimental consequences in an individuals life. Secondly, one needs to take great...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, thus, in conclusion, in other words, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1357.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19923371648 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02851691117 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609195402299 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.661454175 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.4666666667 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.6 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251947479477 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0779948097428 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0780961644864 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120309017361 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0568905228699 0.056905535591 100% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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