Some people believe that corporations have a responsibility to promote the well-being of the societies and environments in which they operate. Others believe that the only responsibility of corporations, provided they operate within the law, is to make as much money as possible.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
Corporations are established to provide service to public sector, thus it has responsiblility to promote for the well being of the people. In the issue topic, there are two disparate options of people about the corporation responsibility. In my opinion, I more more closely aligns with the former one and partially with the later one for the following reasons in the following paragraphs.
Some people argue that one and only responsibility of the corporations is to make as much profit as possible. Their claim is based on the reason that the corporations operate within the law and they act on the basis of it. Every corporations are bound by the law and principles that they have to follow. For instance, the primary purpose of the corporations is to make profit no matter what, because it has number of staffs and employees that the corporations must pay the montly salaries. Also, the office should be maintained regularly for which it requires additional money. Thus, for these reasons, the primary purpose of the corporations is to make money to prosper.
However, Most of the corporations are publicly owned: public have share on it. It should not be forget that the sole profit is to be fairly distribute to corporation manager, staffs, and public. For instance, at the end of the fiscal year, every corporations divulge their profit and loss during the entire year. Those profit should be properly allocated among its shareholders, employees, and company managering board because every one has equal effort to make the company profitable.
Moreover, Corporations are established in societies, and the people around the society are reasons for the security of the corporations. The corporations are beholden to the public for least in one or more reasons. Let us consider the corporation are not caring about the public around the society. In this case, the people might not be happy with the corporation being carefree about the public. They can spread the bad rumors about the corporations besmirching the earned image of it, which surely leads to the malfunction of the corporations. If the corporations promote the well being of the society and people, then the people might have positive value towards the corporations and it prosper.
In conclusion, while some people have divergent thought about the corporation responsibility of acquring more money without considering the benifits of the public and society, most of them have another opinion on which corporation must value the people and society beacasue people have indrect relationship with the corporation and saerves better purpose for the well being of it is it cares for people.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: more
...ration responsibility. In my opinion, I more more closely aligns with the former one and ...
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Line 2, column 257, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'more' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: more
...ration responsibility. In my opinion, I more more closely aligns with the former one and ...
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Message: 'Each' and 'every' are used with singular. Did you mean 'all'?
Suggestion: All
...he law and they act on the basis of it. Every corporations are bound by the law and p...
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Line 5, column 690, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'prospers'?
Suggestion: prospers
...e value towards the corporations and it prosper. In conclusion, while some people have...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, then, thus, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 58.6224719101 102% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2227.0 2235.4752809 100% => OK
No of words: 433.0 442.535393258 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14318706697 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56165014514 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92151183469 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 215.323595506 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.445727482679 0.4932671777 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 716.4 704.065955056 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.7104726709 60.3974514979 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.35 118.986275619 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.65 23.4991977007 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 5.21951772744 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.361336020249 0.243740707755 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124946595307 0.0831039109588 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0801501001119 0.0758088955206 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215984069596 0.150359130593 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0899851162988 0.0667264976115 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 14.1392134831 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 48.8420337079 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 100.480337079 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.