Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?
These days, more and more people are choosing their career as a self-employed. This trend is becoming very popular, as many people do not prepare to work under other employers. This essay will discuss the reasons associated with self-employment and will outline the drawbacks of this trend.
From an overall perspective, there are two main reasons why people like to work as a sole-trader. Firstly, today’s generation loves to work independently. If they work for an organisation or company, they have to follow the employer’s rules and regulations. In contrary, working oneself do not required any tight schedule to maintain. Secondly, availability of internet and online business apps encourage people to work themselves. Nowadays, it is very convenient to make communication with other business holders or customers within a minute via internet. for example, ‘eBay’ is a website where people can do online business from their own place.
However, working as a self-employed would have some negative aspects. Perhaps the primary drawback of this trend would be the lack of definitive schedule for work. As a result, people who are not punctual and determined for their goals, they may not get profit or loose their business. Another disadvantage of self-employment would be lack of proper knowledge about running a business. As there is no partnership with other people who are expert in business, in the long run, there could be chance of closing down the business.
In conclusion, it must be said that the popularity of self-employment has increased in recent years. Taking the above into account, it would appear that working as a self-employed is quite challenging. If people can gain some appropriate information beforehand, there would be less chance of unsuccessfulness.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1535.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42402826855 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.28416669068 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56890459364 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 19.0998836529 49.4020404114 39% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 85.2777777778 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7222222222 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.27777777778 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.342990053913 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103287460244 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0676366650128 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207009227664 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0755336027555 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.86 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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