In this present scenario, computers have become part of our daily usage. People use them in every task, so physical activity has been reduced, children like to play games on computer rather than playing outside. However, this trend has numerous drawbacks which will be scrutinised along with the remedies to minimize the effect.
To commence with, juveniles are addicted to computers which has various repercussion. First of all, children have become lethargic, they are not willing to do any sports activity, which eventually is effecting their communal behavior. They are becoming anti-social and rude due to violent computer games. Modern generation is losing communication skill and ethical values which are the primary of being noble person. Moreover, it has hazardous effect on the health, as sitting in front of computer for long time reduces the eye sight. To illustrate, in India about 40% of school-goers are having eye problem mainly because of computer. Furthermore, it not only affects the health but also the study. Hence, it has several negative impacts which are degenerating the health and behavior of children.
Nevertheless, this complication is hard to solve but there are some steps that can be taken to reduce the impact. Firstly, government should construct more parks, sports Stadium and green belts so that it can divert youngones from computer games. They can run some awareness programs through camps, campaigns and media to promote healthy living style. Besides this, it is duty of gaurdians to an eye on their kid and some light corporal chastisement can also help. Thus, these solutions should be implemented because excess of everything is bad.
In conclusion, computer games are not usually unworthy but, upto some limit, it is right to play games in leisure time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, moreover, nevertheless, so, thus, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1519.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25605536332 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66694702054 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.650519031142 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.8074746193 49.4020404114 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 89.3529411765 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.58823529412 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306886008564 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0837051102987 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0579978425596 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181710910992 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0477277791135 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.93 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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