Nowadays, mass media have a profound impact on shaping people’s idea. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is widely acknowledged that mass media has become an indispensable part in a daily basis, because it not only facilitates the interaction between people in a more convenient way but it is also a useful aid to shaping people’s idea. In my viewpoint, I strongly agree with this perspective due to some aspects which will be discussed in the essay below.
On the one hand, there are two prime reasons why mass media almost occupies a monopoly position on information transmission as a milestone. The fundamental reason is that mass media comprises both printed format and digital format which are widely available today. As a result, citizens have a chance to expose to the news in a more convenient way thanks to the ubiquity of mass media. However, if people become more familiar with it, they will make decisions based on media. Furthermore, mass media also exerts a powerful influence on cultures. It seems to be essential to narrow the gap between many nations around the world and the development of globalization. For example, individuals can discover the cultural uniqueness of other countries through televisions or social networking websites currently. Therefore, they may imitate what other do.
On the other hand, in spite of the fact that mass media encompasses a significant amount of convincing information, many people are still skeptical about its accuracy. For instance, advertisements contain a dozen of information which can be distorted, exaggerated or even fabricated from the truth. Therefore, many people have a habit of checking and analyzing information sources before believe in the public orientation.
In conclusion, I hold a strong belief that people’s idea these days is relying on mass media is undeniable and the local politicians should figure out some viable solutions to mitigate this trend.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, so, still, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, in my view, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1552.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26101694915 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06686941696 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613559322034 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.875529517 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.857142857 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0714285714 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5 7.06120827912 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25759074516 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0779968794214 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0561078813531 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149232002142 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.032570291844 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.