Nowadays, mass media have a profound impact on shaping people’s idea. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is widely acknowledged that mass media has become an indispensable part in our daily life. It does not only broaden the scope of knowledge of people but it is also a useful tool to control the way people think. In my viewpoint, I am convinced with this opinion for several reasons which will be discussed in the essay below.
On the one hand, there are two prime reasons behind the dominance of mass media in the process of public orientation. The fundamental one is its ubiquity. The fact that mass media comprises both printed and digital formats such as televisions, billboards and magazines has allowed them to be present everywhere. As a result, messages delivered by them can become ingrained in us and ultimately influence our ideas and beliefs even though we are not aware of them. If people become more familiar with it, they will eventually believe anything the reporters write in their articles, regardless of what they initially think. For example, many people are easily exposed to mass media on a daily basis, thus they may be influenced by surrounding media to a certain extent.
On the other hand, in spite of the fact that mass media encompasses a significant amount of convincing information, many people are still skeptical about its accuracy, making their ideas immune to these sources of information. For instance, advertisements contain dozens of information which can be distorted, exaggerated or even fabricated. Therefore, many people have a habit of checking and analyzing information sources before believe in what mass media provides.
In conclusion, I hold a strong belief that people’s ideas these days are affected by mass media and the local authorities should figure out some viable solutions to mitigate the impact of mass media on their citizens' opinions.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... surrounding media to a certain extent. On the other hand, in spite of the fact ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, still, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my view, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1512.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10810810811 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86441862919 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591216216216 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5267544695 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.307692308 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7692307692 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.8461538462 7.06120827912 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25282809742 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0824481429912 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0700381229186 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157146576095 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0492598341911 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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