Research shows that business meetings, discussions and training are happening online nowadays. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
There has been increasing interested in online communication in recent years as a global phenomenon. While a great number of people still skeptical about the explosion of this common trend, I content that the benefits outperform the drawbacks in this circumstance.
On the one hand, it seem undeniable that online interaction makes a breakthrough in many fields due to some prime reasons. To begin with, the wide-spread integration of online technologies into human connection is essential especially in the offices or enterprises because it encourages people to exchange information more conveniently than the traditional methods. As a result, it deems to be an useful aid which pave the way for the sake of working process. Additionally, accompanying with the online technological development, there are several social networking websites are generated such as facebook, twitter and so on. Therefore, people may have a chance to strike up new relationships as well as new careers from the internet. Personal trainer perfectly exemplifies this situation, due to the hectic schedules at work people are very vulnerable to overweight. And they could be trained at home by online coaches without spending too much of their time.
On the other hand, there is still a dark side to this case. First of all, in spite of the fact that digital platforms facilitate the communication between people more easily, it have to depend a lot on the network quality. People connection can be interrupted which pose a serious threat to the work efficiency especially in important economic conversations. Secondly, there is no doubt that the lack of face-to-face interaction may result in various detrimental effects. For example, students have a tendency to lose motivation in online learning than offline. Consequently, it exerts a negative influence on the quality of their understanding.
To conclude, although online communication comprises both pros and cons, I wholly believe that the benefits still surpass the drawbacks of this trend.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, well, while, for example, no doubt, such as, as a result, as well as, first of all, in spite of, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1717.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39937106918 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19069596206 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619496855346 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 543.6 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9344977116 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.3125 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.875 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.4375 7.06120827912 176% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0615593301112 0.244688304435 25% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0197133961016 0.084324248473 23% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0246628416245 0.0667982634062 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0358538732654 0.151304729494 24% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0172604958221 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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