In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry.
Why is this the case?
What can be done about this problem?
Although there is a remarkable development in the field of agriculture, many people in the world still suffer from the food shortages. However, based on a huge number of reasons for this circumstance, I believe that there are several ways to handle with this issue.
There are two main factor that influence on the lack of food resource. First of all, in spite of the huge range of food, it just focuses on some developed countries. According to the analysis of many scientists, in some countries in Africa, citizens do not have enough condition to meet their demand for food in their daily life. Secondly, indigenous resident struggle with agricultural land due to the wars in many nations as a concerning problem. For instance, in Syria the government must pay attention to their nation’s peace first and it interrupts people’s lives.
To deal with this problem, all developed countries should attempt to support other countries together in order to minimize the rate of hungry people. In addition, the governments may advance their facilities of agriculture because it not only brings benefits to the development of food resource but it also enhances the knowledge of their citizens about technology.
In conclusion, reducing the number of hungry people is essential for the sustainable improvement. I completely believe that if everyone responsible to each other, this issue will be control in the near future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 20, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'factors'?
Suggestion: factors
... with this issue. There are two main factor that influence on the lack of food reso...
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Line 3, column 20, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'factor' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'factors'.
Suggestion: factors
... with this issue. There are two main factor that influence on the lack of food reso...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, first of all, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1207.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 231.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22510822511 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94273601994 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.614718614719 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 376.2 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.1093982438 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.727272727 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.8181818182 7.06120827912 182% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179421926453 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0623576158465 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0473821423212 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113845113658 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.057020904612 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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