Nowadays more and more people prefer to buy fashionable clothes Does this have positive or negative effect Give reasons and examples to support your answer

In the era of Fashion, people prefer to buy the latest trendy attires to cope up with the fast changing pace of the world. It does have a very good positive vibration on people who prefer to be updated with the latest version of trends. Infact, preferences to fashion sense inculcate a sense of self confidence in the people. For example, consider a face to face interview in a multinational company. It is obvious that people are evaluated for their choice of attire, appearance and the way they carry themselves. Such that, the interviewer underscores the appearance in the first place. A fashionista seems to have an extraordinary self confidence and looks more audacious to face any kind of interview or questionnaire session.
Fashionistas are often considered as the most elite part of the society. They are designated to be the icon for youngsters. Inspirations and methodologies are often initiated by such trend setters. A trend setter never give upon their creativity and innovations. They use the same ideology in all fields of life. To exemplify, Lady Gaga is considered to be an iconoclast for defying the traditional ways of dressing up to a party. Moreover, she is a youth icon with more self confidence preluding the audience with her mesmerizing attire and music. Nevertheless to mention, there are similar icons such as Katy Perry, Rihanna who have a great sense of fashion for dresses that gave tremendous success in the field of pop and music.
To recapitulate, Fashionistas always possess a positive vibration that is contagious to the society. Once, the positivity is induced people never give up on their focus on the choice of attire they wear. Subsequently, carrying them towards the path of success.

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Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, moreover, nevertheless, so, for example, kind of, such as, in the first place

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1441.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02090592334 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99126839813 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547038327526 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.9223878149 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.0555555556 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9444444444 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.22222222222 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160297644107 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0423000670373 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0482702120845 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106983089386 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0523363204827 0.056905535591 92% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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