Nowadays more and more young people hold important positions in the government. Some people think that is a good thing while others argue that it is not suitable. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is true that highly responsible posts in governmental bodies are increasingly occupied by young people. While some people are opposed to this trend, I would argue that young people have necessary abilities and skills to undertake these tasks.
On the one hand, there are several reasons why some people think that young people cannot hold key positions in the government. First, because young people supposedly have not sufficient qualifications, they find it hard to make older people admit their leadership. Seniors think that young individuals need to learn more to be able to manage such sensitive areas as law making and foreign affairs. Second, most young people are short of real experience as they have not faced many challenges. This shortage could lead to an unwise decision that often negatively influences many inhabitants.
On the other hand, I believe that young people can bring many benefits when they are in top positions. One reason is that young minds could adapt to change faster than the old, which helps them to make quick decisions appropriate to real situations. This adaptation becomes increasingly crucial in the current changeable world where many events could have a global impact. For example, the escalation of the trade war between the US and China nearly immediately influence the Vietnamese stock market. Additionally, young people have creativeness, which could help to make innovative breakthrough policies related to new areas such as artificial intellegent and automation that have not existed before.
In conclusion, although there are strong arguments for both views, it seems to me that it is more beneficial that young people are selected to play some key roles in the government.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1458.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28260869565 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76377799562 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61231884058 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.9656608204 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.153846154 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2307692308 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.38461538462 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274564364576 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0992975123294 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0888357064671 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185241666883 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.064821709553 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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