Nowadays most people spend less time at their homes. What are the causes for it? What are the effects on the society and individuals?
In recent years many people do not spend their time in own homes, therefore; its effects on their personal and social life.
Many people are interested to work more than usual to earn more money, some people work extra time or have a second job to earn more money because they strongly believe that money makes a better life for them or they can buy some luxury things to improve their living level for their self and their family. In addition; people who work overtime can help their society to earn more money and increase their social life. For instance, the Japanese are working hard and they can reach the first level of industry and technology. When people have responsibility for their job and their group, they can reduce some costs in their company and society with their responsibility to own jobs.
Owing to the economic situation in many modern societies, families have not enough time to be in their homes because many couples are work outside and they work overtime to earn more money. As a result of these situations, couples face many problems in their relationship, many couple divorce and prefer individuals living to matrimony life. When people live outside instead of their home, they face some problems with their children because parents need enough time to upbringing their children. When people could not share their emotions with their family it has negative effects on society because people have not good emotions about their relationship.
When people work hard and over time they lose their leisure time that they could spend with their loves and families. Although it has some positive effect on people economy life to have better facilities, they cannot feel passionate about their family and children and it reduces social benefits in the long-term.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 311, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, therefore, for instance, in addition, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1496.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00334448161 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29310985669 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.461538461538 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.968157125 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.0 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1818181818 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.54545454545 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240050633605 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12427993649 0.084324248473 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0620454188487 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186383226232 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0308807262559 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 9.78957915832 174% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.