Nowadays, most people try to achieve the ideal work life balance. However, with nowaday's ever-changing world, the demand for workload in range of fields are giving rise, it can lead to the imbalance in many part of lives. I write down a few causes and managements in this essay.
The issue is often caused with some unwanted consequences. Firstly. having a unscientifical work life balance have a negative effect on people's health as these individuals tend to sacrifice their daily or extracurricular activities for work. Remaing this in the long term will the attributable to the persistence and addiction with work to earn money for some expenses, so they willingly give up those daily things, which can lead to an increased of stress and form a sedentary lifestyle. Secondly, the imbalance work and life also gives rise to growing problems with parenting. A materialistic society todays drives them to not stop with heavy workload and they desire that haveing career development prospect is the best choice to nurture the children.Without adequate supervisions from parents, children can easily on the wrong track.
Therefore, some practical measurements are suggested to mitigate this problems. One viable step is that people could consider and see what the best things and set priorities in life. After working hard all day, officiers should enjoy themselves by taking part in leisure activities and spend time and love for domestic life. Furthermore, workers should plan a flexible schedule for their life. For example, some days, they might focus on working, while others have more time and energy to pursue their hobbies or relax after heavy workload. This will enable people to achieve the most conscious status for an energetic week.
In conclusion, work life imbalance can lead to some harmful impacts on people's health and mental, so some steps could be followed in this situation to minimize this problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1611.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18006430868 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77445942986 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623794212219 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.413843564 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.4 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7333333333 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.93333333333 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306916654294 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0992193967368 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0560792858598 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190766635396 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0198505045559 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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