Nowadays, people are spending increasingly large amounts of money on their marriage parties. Many people feel large and expensive weddings cause problems for the bride and groom.
Do you agree? Use personal examples in your response.
These days, many people are spending lots of amount on parties and enjoyment activities like weekend parties and birthday occasions. Marriages are no exception to the list, as humans pouring huge sums of money on buying expensive ornaments and on arranging receptions. However, there are some people who believe that wedding parties cause a problem to the bride and groom as they should spend huge wealth on them. To some extent, I agree with this point and I will discuss some reasons.
Firstly, Most of the modern marriages are arranged at hotels or lavish holiday spots, which are very costly yet attractive. The Bride or groom family will pay for this by taking loans or by managing their assets, this causes huge financial burden. For example, It is the bride's family, who are completely responsible for the event, because of this, they use most of their wealth resulting in lessening of the money for other siblings. Moreover, In many Asian countries dowry is one of the tradition during marriages in which groom should spend his money on bride for marriage agreement. Nowadays, this is causing arguments between opposite sides due to the delay in arranging cash. Furthermore, most of the weddings waste large amounts of food which results in wastage of cash.
Turning on to the other side of the argument, Most of the couples believe that wedding is the one time activity and often think as a lifetime memory. This increases enthusiasm for making the party memorable. In this case, they often invite a plethora of guests to showcase their one time activity. For Instance, In India couples get blessings from their dearest ones during their marriage. In addition to this, older people feel happy when their children or grandchildren tie knot.
To sum up, although marriage is considered as a large occasion, it is memorable and can be remembered for the lifetime. Nonetheless, people should understand the struggle of the person who pay for the event. In my opinion, marriages should be celebrated based on their personal wealth, I mean that people should not lend cash to arrange parties. Instead, they should arrange for whatever they have.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, nonetheless, so, thus, for example, for instance, i mean, in addition, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1805.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 359.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0278551532 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53104497286 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554317548747 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 552.6 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.1436593482 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8947368421 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.73684210526 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338270660638 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0937816705233 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0536147586832 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187845532686 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.045766978378 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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