Nowadays people live longer after they retire.
How does this affect individuals and society? What can be done about this?
The sociologists stand that the average duration of the period of living of the pensioners have increased. This, probably, has an impact on both individuals in particular and the rest part of the society in general, so the question arises on whether any measures should be undertaken.
At the first glance, the positive effect is obvious, while the elder generation provides a strong support to young families as they can help to raise children. Giving the parent the opportunity to continue working, they also improve family well-being because there is no need to pay to a babysitter. In this case, it seems that the trend mentioned is a great advantage both for individual family’s welfare and the social system, so nothing should be assumed.
On the other hand, there is also a negative effect of this situation. First of all, it was proved by the neurobiologists that retirement is a harmful factor, while the early retirement launches the degradation mechanisms. It happens because the laziness in a part of essence of everybody’s personality and people tend to stop their intellectual activities as they stop working. This may lead to several diseases and disability. Authorities are now attempting the first steps in implementation of active aging programs with educational and entertainment facilities to prevent dementia.
Mulling over the reason mentioned above, one more problem arises. The increase in number of ill, disabled and retired ones has sharp consequences on the economy of health care system, causing an increase in the tax burden on the employed ones. To provide this impact the funding system needs to be reexamined and restructured in general. Aimed at the repartition of the charges, the new system should take into consideration the proportion of retired and employed people, effective investment of the existing funds and the participation of state in attracting additional funding.
To summarize, the problem is connected with not only the duration but also the quality of life of retired people and the government should take measures to minimize the impact on the life of society.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, so, well, while, in general, in particular, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1782.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22580645161 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99355895897 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577712609971 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 571.5 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.7427826422 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.8 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7333333333 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204303830822 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0618130489677 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0414956573929 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102518582467 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0359264129786 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.68 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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