Nowadays people live longer after they retire.
How does this affect individuals and society?
What can be done about this?
Nowadays, people living after retirement longer and longer in comparison to the past. This part of life that
continues in retirement poses a number of problems in association with individuals and society which
could be alleviated to some extent by taking into account some measures by governments.
In the beginning, living longer in retirement status, at least, can face a conflict with younger generations
which appears in the difference of lifestyles so that raises disputes. For example, the younger generation
may have a tendency to hosting loud parties or getting back late at home in contrast to the elderly that
prefer to live a quiet and regular life. Furthermore, people in retirement are struggling with social and
medical expenses. The matter of fact is that without a little doubt, living costs tremendously rising by
aging. For instance, people in average life expectancy could not afford their medical expenses because
neither health insurance nor any type of insurance can cover their costs while they’re more in need by
getting older due to any type of health disease while they’re negligible for special discounts. If there had
some conscious and potential plans, it would have a pleasant retirement life.
In order to tackle problems, I contend that government has to take into account some measures to cope
with problems and take away the strain on older people who are in need more and vulnerable deserve
special services. For instance, in my country, if the government sets aside funds and some special
discounts like fully medical supports, they could live separately of individuals independently and do their
stuff while there is no worry about medical expenses.
In conclusion, the government by anticipating average life expectancy and take an action to take down
these tensions, many of the most potential problems that the elderly are encountered may be countered.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, may, so, while, as to, at least, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1625.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32786885246 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7867193779 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550819672131 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.6841420255 49.4020404114 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.727272727 106.682146367 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.7272727273 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8181818182 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 19.0 4.38176352705 434% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20656221935 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0817291307485 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0703745579264 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0591489408576 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0746989087423 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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