The issue of wasting food is being serious in some regions at this period. In my view, lack of people's awareness is the main cause and the government should implament some rules to adress this.
In this developing world, farming industry is also growing repidly and through this we are getting as much food as we require. When dinning in restaurants or in shop, many individuals tend to order more food beyond their need. However, few person developed this habit to pack the rest of the meal if they connot complete it. Consequently, It is common to us that many plates remain unfinished and end up with bins eventually. In Bangladesh, for example, the amount of food is wasted stunning 2.3 millions which could feed thousand of destitute people.
The government have a tremendous role to play in reversing this situation. The significant measure authorities should implament is to enhance the awareness of people of the importance of saving grains. This can be done in various ways ranging from distributing flyers among communities to playing advertisement on Television. In terms of purchaising or ordering food, people should more conscious what will they eat, they should not buy anything extra or if in case food remain unfinished they should keep it in a freezer a or this it to the destitute person.
In conclusion, I believe that less consciousness of public, and purchaising extra food are the key reasons of food wastage. Government should imply some roles to rise public awareness, and people aslo have to open their mind when buying meals.
- The diagram shows how geothermal energy is used to produced electricity. 73
- Some universities now offer their courses on the Internet so that people can study online Is this a positive or negative development 78
- Task2:Today more people are travelling than ever before.Why is this the case?What are the benefits of travelling for the traveler? 67
- One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing.Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages ? 73
- The bar charts illustrate the alterations and differences in the average percentages of sodium, saturated fats and added sugars in typical meals consumed in the USA. 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 237, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun person seems to be countable; consider using: 'few people', 'few persons'.
Suggestion: few people; few persons
...r more food beyond their need. However, few person developed this habit to pack the rest o...
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Line 3, column 523, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a thousand'.
Suggestion: a thousand
... stunning 2.3 millions which could feed thousand of destitute people. The government ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, so, for example, in conclusion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1301.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9846743295 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76888787521 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616858237548 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 388.8 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.6729934817 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.076923077 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0769230769 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.15384615385 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24682739739 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0830061297201 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0642808119773 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148686914266 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00851178688008 0.056905535591 15% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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