NOWADAYS SENDING CHILDREN TO BOARDING SCHOOL EITHER IN OTHER COUNTRIES OR ONE OWN COUNTRY IS BECOMING INCREASING POPULAR WHY IS IT | TOEFL IELTS GMAT GRE SAT ACT PTE ESL

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NOWADAYS SENDING CHILDREN TO BOARDING SCHOOL (EITHER IN OTHER COUNTRIES OR ONE OWN COUNTRY) IS BECOMING INCREASING POPULAR. WHY IS IT?

It is becoming a growing trend to send children to a boarding school for pursuing education either with in the country or out of the country. The main reason behind this is that parents are working and it is quintessential to make them disciplined.

Families are nuclear nowadays and most of the parents are working, thus they do not have appropriate time for the take care of their children. As a result, they send their children to boarding schools. Though the parents are busy with their jobs, but still they want to provide good moral values and manners to their wards, so they have no other option apart from sending their children to such schools. For example, In UK, most of working mothers are concerned for the good behaviour of their childern, but they do not have time, thus they forcefully sent their children to day boarding school in stead of normal schools.

Children, who spent their most of the time under the observation of teachers or guides are usually well behaved and intelligent. Thus, parents opted to send their wards to full day schools. In such schools, children are away from distractions such as outing, parties or family problems. Thus, they can devote their full time on study with full concentration. As a consequence, they are intelligent as a compare to children from normal schools. In addition to this, they become responsible and disciplined for their daily routine, because they have to take care of themselves on regular basis. For instance, children, who did study in boarding school know how to cook and wash their clothes, thus they are already prepared to do job or business in a different countries.

To conclude, children taking education from boarding schools rising day by day, because parents are busy with their work but they want to make their child a good person as well as successful then Boarding school is best choice for their children.

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IELTS Writing Task II - IELTS Academic

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...well as successful then Boarding school is best choice for their children.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, still, then, thus, well, apart from, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, as a result, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1580.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89164086687 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57131506961 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.476780185759 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.2946644237 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.857142857 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0714285714 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.71428571429 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168338155363 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0779869964445 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0848495935905 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140761519581 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0652460110865 0.056905535591 115% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 50.2224549098 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, still, then, thus, well, apart from, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, as a result, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments