Your local hospital has advertised for people to do unpaid work for helping at the hospital. You would like to do some work at the hospital in your free time.
Write a letter to the hospital. In your letter, explain why you would like to do unpaid work at the hospital.
Say what type of unpaid work you would be able to do.
Give details of when you would be available for the work.
Dear sir,
I am writing this letter to accentuate you about my willingness to do voluntary work at your hospital in free hours.
In fact, I want to contribute my share in form of services towards the welfare of society. Thus, by helping the needed person, I will get a lot of satisfaction. I will get peace for my soul by doing some tasks in support of people in need.
Actually, I do not belong to medical field, but, during my college days I attended training of providing first aid. In such training, I learnt to do bandages, giving medicines to disable persons as well as helping them in having food. Hence, I am able to do these kinds of support.
I am working in bank. Thus, I am unable to come on daily basis, but, can devote time on weekends and on holidays. I would feel pleasure if you give me chance to do some good deeds without any consideration.
Looking forward to hear from you.
Yours faithfully,
Gurpreet kaur.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear sir, I am writing this letter to accentuate y...
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Line 9, column 69, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...I am unable to come on daily basis, but, can devote time on weekends and on holid...
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Line 11, column 17, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...t any consideration. Looking forward to hear from you. Yours faithfully, Gurpr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, hence, if, look, so, thus, well, in fact, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 0.0 7.48453608247 0% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 780.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 171.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56140350877 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61010078487 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.690058479532 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 235.8 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.6565490043 44.8134815571 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.0 76.5299724578 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.25 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.16666666667 4.34317383033 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300425182412 0.216113520407 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0910303389577 0.0766984524023 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0860055564403 0.0603063233224 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147868253511 0.12726935374 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111345138125 0.0580467560999 192% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 8.37731958763 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.58 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.