Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology.
In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make?
Has this become a positive or negative develpoment?
Recent technology affect the way people communicate with each other .it is very useful for us. with the help of internet we can communucate with different types of people whether he/she living anywhere in the world.it is very easy to get in touch with friends, family, and relatives who live in abroad. this was not possible in past.
In ancient times people use letters to send their messages from one person to another.it was long time process. Nowadays smartphones and internet deliver the messages instatntly and it saves our time.it is also helpful for students in different fields.With the help of internet they make their assignments easily and submit to their head of department by online using their email address.By doing this they save their time and paper.it made businessman easier to communicate with each other.
on the other hand,it has also some negative easpects.Nowadays everyone have their own personal mobile so they spent most of their time on phones and donot give time to their families.using phones on traffis areas may give birth to accidents and in most cases people lost their precious lives.students give less time to their study due to this, they get less marks.After getting less marks they are depressed and take negative steps like suicide.children play games on mobile phones and computers so their eyesight becomes weak.it also give birth to some diseases.
From above, we conclude that people misuse the social sites like on facebook they make fake account and interact with different people by chatting without face interaction.it can lead to dangerous.internet service is also more expensive than letters.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, in most cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1395.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24436090226 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80800896607 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.597744360902 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 20.2975951904 187% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 172.212256313 49.4020404114 349% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 199.285714286 106.682146367 187% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.0 20.7667163134 183% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.28571428571 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188677929705 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110124848087 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0802532647396 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129218856016 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0675896865575 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.3 13.0946893788 170% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.91 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.1 11.3001002004 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.85 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.1190380762 170% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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