Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish Why do you think this is happening What can government to do help radius this amount of rubbish produced

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Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can government to do help radius this amount of rubbish produced .

In this expeditiously evolving world number of people are making much factory along the country where boondocks. Such as factory's get out of rubbish and smoke. It reason many people claim that protease.
  On the one hand. Nowadays a lot of factories are building in country side.
Consequently many people may be having a job. However if the companies developing keep going sothat fabrics length of service. Otherside organization companies sabotage air and environmentally. Atmosphere problems Are a hotly-debated topic that often divides opinion. Haveing considered these points fabrics big companies should be reduce or new and economic organizations must be build near future.Taking everything into consideration Than several environmental problems may be slove and we environmentalism.
Furthermore almost several years later.It clear that everyone near future our planeta will be full rubbish and harmly smoke. So we may be able to clean environmental place.If we environmentally friend for the ecology than we will be able to slove problems. If our country should be build several reserve.I am in broad agreement with those other hand they help us radius  pollution.Scientist according to theories developing countries are increasing hit air than other countries
In conclusion, although when we may be able to radius industry cars. We can find almost solutions to some of the problemsIn this expeditiously evolving world number of people are making much factory along the country where boondocks. Such as factory's get out of rubbish and smoke. It reason many people claim that protease.
  On the one hand. Nowadays a lot of factories are building in country side.
Consequently many people may be having a job. However if the companies developing keep going sothat fabrics length of service. Otherside organization companies sabotage air and environmentally. Atmosphere problems Are a hotly-debated topic that often divides opinion. Haveing considered these points fabrics big companies should be reduce or new and economic organizations must be build near future.Taking everything into consideration Than several environmental problems may be slove and we environmentalism.
Furthermore almost several years later.It clear that everyone near future our planeta will be full rubbish and harmly smoke. So we may be able to clean environmental place.If we environmentally friend for the ecology than we will be able to slove problems. If our country should be build several reserve.I am in broad agreement with those other hand they help us radius  pollution.Scientist according to theories developing countries are increasing hit air than other countries
In conclusion, although when we may be able to radius industry cars. We can find almost solutions to some of the problemsIn this expeditiously evolving world number of people are making much factory along the country where boondocks. Such as factory's get out of rubbish and smoke. It reason many people claim that protease.
  On the one hand. Nowadays a lot of factories are building in country side.
Consequently many people may be having a job. However if the companies developing keep going sothat fabrics length of service. Otherside organization companies sabotage air and environmentally. Atmosphere problems Are a hotly-debated topic that often divides opinion. Haveing considered these points fabrics big companies should be reduce or new and economic organizations must be build near future.Taking everything into consideration Than several environmental problems may be slove and we environmentalism.
Furthermore almost several years later.It clear that everyone near future our planeta will be full rubbish and harmly smoke. So we may be able to clean environmental place.If we environmentally friend for the ecology than we will be able to slove problems. If our country should be build several reserve.I am in broad agreement with those other hand they help us radius  pollution.Scientist according to theories developing countries are increasing hit air than other countries
In conclusion, although when we may be able to radius industry cars. We can find almost solutions to some of the problems

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Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, furthermore, however, if, may, so, in conclusion, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 39.0 13.1623246493 296% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 30.0 7.85571142285 382% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 57.0 24.0651302605 237% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3555.0 1615.20841683 220% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 643.0 315.596192385 204% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52877138414 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.03561760524 4.20363070211 120% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.28640702873 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.222395023328 0.561755894193 40% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1112.4 506.74238477 220% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 2.10420841683 428% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 40.0 16.0721442886 249% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 78.2617403333 49.4020404114 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.875 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.075 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.775 7.06120827912 25% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 13.0 4.38176352705 297% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 48.0 5.01903807615 956% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 15.0 3.4128256513 440% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0879636604274 0.244688304435 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0284696858462 0.084324248473 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0302168691322 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0561570617517 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0372705604819 0.056905535591 65% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.81 8.58950901804 68% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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