Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish Why do you think this is happening What can the governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced

Essay topics:

Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish.

Why do you think this is happening ?

What can the governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced ?

It is not peculiar to see our world full of rubbish as its people in different continents keep producing waste everyday. People are ignorant about the impact from all the rubbish to the world. However, it happens because voracious of reasons. Governments are also needed in order to minimize the amount of rubbish produced.

Many believe that piled of rubbish are caused mainly because of overpopulation. By having excessive number of human kind in this world, it means that there will be more waste. Rubbish or waste can be in several forms, such as, used plastic bags, used cans and utensils, and so on. As people need to stay alive, they need to eat constantly everyday. Therefore, they will produce waste from their cooking or leftover meals. Used cans and utensils are also considered as rubbish if people immediately throw it away after use it once. Besides that, plastic bags, which mostly received as a shopping bag from a particular supermarket, will more likely to be thrown away after people do not see its use anymore. Those rubbish will be piled up in the waste site, which each city provides and will give severe impact to many aspects.

In order to combat this unfortunate situation, governments are needed to assist this problem. There might be several ways that they can try, for example, governments can make a policy to any supermarkets to change the shopping bags and provide the alternative to a bag, which is not made of plastic. This solution can reduce the amount of rubbish drastically if the policy are really happening. Other solutions, such as, ban plastic utensils as in these present days also already occur, therefore, people who want to eat outside, consider to bring their own utensils.

Overall, many other reasons can be the cause of this issue. But, to tackle this situation completely, the world need longer time and patience as this is not an easy problem caused by human kind.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 112, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...fferent continents keep producing waste everyday. People are ignorant about the impact f...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 340, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...stay alive, they need to eat constantly everyday. Therefore, they will produce waste fro...
^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, really, so, therefore, for example, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1598.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88685015291 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51943970541 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538226299694 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.584994029 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.7777777778 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1666666667 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.22222222222 7.06120827912 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236902794321 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0772332203791 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497695945439 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138936511779 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0422022572815 0.056905535591 74% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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