Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish.
Why do you think this is happening?
What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?
With the development of modern society, a greater amount of trash is created through our daily activities. This essay will try to explain how it happens and what the authorities can do to solve the problem.
To begin with, one of the main reasons is the growth of the petroleum industry which has developed for over a hundred years and has created the advanced technology, allowing huge number of petroleum products can be provided to customers with extremely low cost. Hence, today people can enjoy the convenient life with plastic products such as plastic bags, air-conditioner or televisions, etc. Nevertheless, the petroleum products also contribute the majority of the garbage produced by human beings, creating serious problem to wield life. For example, sea mammals such as whales and sea turtles cannot distinguish the difference between plankton and plastic bags and may swallow them together as food, causing these creatures dead in digestive difficulties.
To solve this problem, one of the short-term actions need to be done quickly is limiting the usage of petroleum products in economic activities. For instance, authorities can place extra tax on products which contain plastic, making it be too expensive to for consumers to purchase. In addition, building an efficient recycling ecosystem is another option for governments; it can reduce the consumption of raw plastic material and prevent more trash flowing into nature. In long-term, the officers should formulate policies that encourage all industries to look for more environmentally friendly resource to replace the petroleum material.
In conclusion, I believe the priority to solve the problem of the growing amount of garbage is to reduce the usage of petroleum products. In short-term, government can increase the tax on plastic related product and construct efficient recycling ecosystem and look for the substitutions that are more environmentally friendly in long-term.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, look, may, nevertheless, so, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in short, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1656.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.48344370861 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01131588053 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592715231788 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.7070988894 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.0 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1666666667 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5 7.06120827912 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133169229846 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0522233941744 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0482057541907 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0940393125154 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0421602868609 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.8 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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