Nowadays we can watch entertainment performance from the screens and no need to watch it live.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In today’s world entertainment performances can easily watch through screens, therefore some argue that watching live of them become unnecessary. I do not agree with the statement because the atmosphere and distraction problems.
Although many plays, operas are recently one click away from their audience, a real interaction only can provide by being in the theatre. As, the human nature is mainly based on the senses, reaching as many senses as possible might have important roles on participants understanding of the performance. For instance, some experiences such as hearing the acoustics, smelling the stage dusts not only can boost the audience appreciation to the performance, but also allow them to leave the play with a high satisfaction.
Moreover, watching a live performance via laptop or TV usually comes along with distractions which causes to not fully understand about it. This is because, being able to stop the video anytime the audience wants, provides a sense of relaxation and reduce the perception of importances to the play. For example, due to the COVID-19 lockdown, theatres were closed in Turkey for two months and the Cultural Ministry uploaded many operas on their YouTube channel for their citizens to watch it, however viewing numbers were relatively lower than the normal audience numbers since many of the citizens prefers to watch with their bare eyes.
To conclude, although it is convenient to access entertainment performances from the screens, I do not think this development can take the place of the old-fashioned performance watching because the experience which is provided to the participants and receiving attention to the play from them would not be in the same level.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, moreover, so, therefore, for example, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1454.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32600732601 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95905860958 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611721611722 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 82.379878881 49.4020404114 167% => OK
Chars per sentence: 161.555555556 106.682146367 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.3333333333 20.7667163134 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.77777777778 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217862611142 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0905877171564 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0859436058948 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155946582238 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.091904113713 0.056905535591 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.8 13.0946893788 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.23 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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