Shortage of Housing has given several social consequences Only the government who can solve the problems To what extend do you agree or disagree

Essay topics:

Shortage of Housing has given several social consequences. Only the government who can solve the problems.

To what extend do you agree or disagree?

As the limited housing options come with different societal outcomes, some people believe that the government can find solutions to this situation. I agree with the statement because the government can make regulations and predict the circumstances in the coming years.

As the lacking housing options are generally a collective problem rather than a local one, no individuals or institution can handle this pressing problem without a support of a government. Because, governments can regulate and authorise new laws. For instance, in the Netherlands housing options are limited, therefore the rents are getting higher as the demands get an increase. To solve this the Dutch government offers many rent waiver options those who lives with a different generation in the same household. The reason for that, when people choice to live together the need for a housing has shown a significant decrease.

Furthermore, the government is the right address to point out the housing system, since it has the authority to access a big data to see the prediction of changing numbers of housing needs statistically in the upcoming years. This development can guide the government by giving time to find varied solutions. For example, the Municipality of London recently has built a Data Department which specifically works on indication of the housing system in the city. According to the Major, this new office will help them to build new living areas before the need of them will rise.

To conclude, not having limitless housing options brings societal problems and governments are the ones that need to find solutions for their citizens. This is not only because they can regulate new laws, but they also have access to the big data where they can predict the near future for this very situation therefore find new ways to tackle the issue.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, therefore, for example, for instance

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1543.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14333333333 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75450943404 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4822948623 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.692307692 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0769230769 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.23076923077 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178848031753 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0713318939839 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0355839216196 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116474442131 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.025826288009 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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