In several people, several people believe that it is better to use money for building new rapid train railway lines while others opine that the money should be used for bettering current public transportation. I completely agree with the latter view because of several reasons.
On the one hand, rapid train is beneficial in overcoming traffic congestion problem because it has special railway and operates in rapid speed which makes its passengers to arrive earlier than they usually do. Then, using money to build more rapid train railways will support more rapid trains to operate. The more rapid trains that operate, the less traffic congestion will occur. However, even though has great potential in stopping traffic jam problem, rapid train basically has quite high fare which will make people reluctant to switch from their personal transportation.
On the other hand, public transportation also has potential in overcoming traffic jam problem. By bettering existing public transportation, people will feel more safe and comfortable in riding them, thus will make them to choose public transportation over their private vehicles. Moreover, because public transportation such as MRT and Bus usually have affordable fares, people will more likely to be willing to ride them after their quality have been improved. As a result, it is better to spend money to improve existing public transportation because it has bigger possibility in overcoming traffic congestion.
In conclusion, rapid train is great in overcoming traffic congestion problem because it has special railway and can operate in rapid speed. However, because it has more expensive fares compared to public transportation such as MRT and Bus, I completely agree that it is better to spend money to upgrade existing public transportation which has bigger possibility in overcoming traffic jam problem.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, moreover, so, then, thus, while, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1587.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45360824742 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84811112659 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.484536082474 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.464376618 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.25 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.25 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213888928956 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0935894643439 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0788134065557 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154376469012 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0604782708715 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.63 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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