The older generations tend to have very traditional ideas about how people should live, think and behave. However, some people believe that these ideas are not helpful in preparing younger generations in modern life.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In a world where culture is given of much importance, the advice of the elderly has been beneficial in guiding younger generations’ succeed in later life. Some people argue that the traditional ideas of the elderly about life are advantageous for one’s succession, however, others think that these ideas mostly are obsolete and are no longer applicable nowadays. While I agree that some ideas should not be longer followed, I also believe that there are some traditional beliefs that people have to put much importance.
On one hand, some beliefs and traditions are manipulative of younger people’s lives, particularly a student’s life. For example, grandparents and parents tend to dictate to their children what kind of profession they should be choosing later in life. In addition, fixed marriage is still very common as the parents are taking authority in choosing a spouse for their children. Moreover, women as being the homemaker and men being the family provider is still a stereotyped belief for many, these days. Having said all of that, these beliefs should be forgotten and should no longer be practiced as these are life ruining and a person’s right of choice is being disrespected.
On the other hand, there are some beliefs that are considered life improving rather than life ruining. For instance, in the Philippines, where a family takes pride in taking care of the elderly and are giving value to close family ties, sons and daughters even after getting married take charge in taking care of their older parents. Moreover, gestures of respect when approaching the elderly like kissing, hugging and bowing to them are undeniably a wise practice to continue. Furthermore, the first child who has been raised to finish studies, take over with the responsibility of sending their younger siblings to school if the parents could no longer be able to, is another profound family tradition that has to continue these days.
In conclusion, while many of the beliefs of the elderly are considered life ruining and are no longer applicable these days, some beliefs are still to be given value and are admittedly still helpful as for the improvement of good quality family relationships and respect. Having that in mind, in my perspective, traditions and beliefs are to be decided whether to be forgotten or to continually be put in practice depending on what these beliefs could be brought to the life of people.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, still, while, as for, as to, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 36.0 13.1623246493 274% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2056.0 1615.20841683 127% => OK
No of words: 401.0 315.596192385 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12718204489 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47492842339 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84932771303 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.483790523691 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 657.9 506.74238477 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.2135040004 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.857142857 106.682146367 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.6428571429 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6428571429 7.06120827912 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22583018921 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.089028651438 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0782983063884 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153391418522 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106233244263 0.056905535591 187% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.07 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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