The older people who need employment have to compete with younger ones. What problems can this create? What are some solutions?
Nowadays, it is true that in order to apply for jobs senior citizens have to be in competition with younger ones. Several problems relating to society have resulted from this tendency and they should be tackled by several effective solutions from national and local authorities.
There are some main problems caused by the competition between the old and the young. The main issue is that older people often have difficulty in finding jobs because of age discrimination. Therefore, they can become unemployed, which not only increases the unemployment rate in the community but also makes them unable to meet basic human needs as well as decreases their quality of life. Another problem is that the old employers can be put under a lot of pressure as younger people are capable of adapting more easily to changes in work practices than the elderly could do. As a consequence, older workers may have some health problems such as heart disease or headaches due to the stress of copying these changes.
Since such issues are serious, the government and individuals should take steps immediately to address these problems. The first solution would be that the government can impose laws on companies to stop discrimination against older workers. Therefore, the elderly can have more opportunities to apply for a job successfully and make their living. The second solution is that older individuals should train their skills hard and adopt positive attitudes to changes at work. Besides, if young colleagues help them out with work, the elderly can perform better.
In conclusion, the rivalry between older and younger people in employment has negative impacts on society so that appropriate solutions should be taken by not only governments but also individuals to prevent this situation.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, may, second, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, such as, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1501.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1937716263 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77159821835 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59169550173 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2400858436 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.461538462 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2307692308 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53846153846 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273349940074 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0896840606083 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0399402354404 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161277873758 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0363978474651 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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