One of the major problems facing the world today is the growing number of refugees. The developed nations in the world should tackle this problem by taking more refugees.
To what extent do you agree with this opinion?
There is little doubt that the issue of refugees is a global problem. While it most immediately affects developing nations, there is a strong argument that developed countries should help by allowing higher levels of immigration. However this is not easy to solve just by allowing more refugees to immigrate into developed countries, because historically immigration has caused as many problems as it solves.
For many countries today, it is impossible to ignore what has happened on the other side of the world because we now live in a global village and nations are more closely bonded than ever before. Mostly, those refugees are urged to escape from disaster or war which happened in their motherland. And if the developed countries refuse to help, it may cause large number of people die. Sometimes when help such as financial aid or medical teams do not arrive in time, accepting those refugees is the most effective way to reduce deaths.
However, large number of refugees also largely affect local people, and cause lots of problems. The most serious one is that those people who come from undeveloped countries and always live under poverty may increase the crime rate in local. Without government help, they can’t find appropriate job and therefore have no money to raise themselves. Some refugees tend to stolen or crime which make the society unstable. Moreover, some people who do not wish to go back to their countries have finally occupied resources which initially prepare for local residences. And it will cause lower life quality of local people.
Overall, I tend to believe that accepting those refugees cause more problems as it solved. And from my perspective I more agree with the method that developed countries only provide international aid to other countries.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 231, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
... allowing higher levels of immigration. However this is not easy to solve just by allow...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1515.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15306122449 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61864119119 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595238095238 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1666531714 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.0 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152058256827 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0475225387468 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0436175116446 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101399865473 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0478726878899 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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