One should only use enough money to fulfill their needs and rest should be given to needy. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Essay topics: One should only use enough money to fulfill their needs and rest should be given to needy. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Manu12's picture

It is good old saying that" Money is not everything but everything needs money". Money is like a power. It can change life of individuals. This particular topic asserts that after fulfill one's basic needs: food, shelter, clothing ; should everyone donates rest of money they have? I am totally agree with the statement. And shall explore the same from various aspects in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, if we donates money to a needy person after fulfill our needs. It will lead to increase in country's economic growth. Obviously, a country is considered as a developed nation as well as strong nation. It boost up not only in one sector but in many sectors such as education, industrialization, modernisation, as well as decrease in crime rates. A good epitome of this could be a survey was conducted by delhi association claimed that about 60% of people in India lives under poverty level and helpless.
Probing ahead, there are some antagonists who believe that when every person's have equal amount of money there is not any discrimination among poor and rich people. Each and every person easily reach level upto poverty. As result of It, they all could have same rights as well as use rights properly and make their lives more comfortable. To illustrate It, our prime minister also started trust about discrimination of status among both type of people: rich, poor.
In the conclusion, as we have seen that there are lots of answer to this question but I believe that it's responsibility of every individuals to donate money to needy person. Because money is first and foremost need of person but instead of it, good heart is counted as on the Ist position.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 306, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
... rest of money they have? I am totally agree with the statement. And shall explore t...
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Line 2, column 22, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'we' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'donate'
Suggestion: donate
...owing paragraphs. To begin with, if we donates money to a needy person after fulfill o...
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Line 2, column 218, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'boosts'?
Suggestion: boosts
...ped nation as well as strong nation. It boost up not only in one sector but in many s...
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Line 4, column 51, Rule ID: LOTS_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun answer seems to be countable; consider using: 'lots of answers'.
Suggestion: lots of answers
...clusion, as we have seen that there are lots of answer to this question but I believe that its...
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Line 4, column 144, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s responsibility of every individuals to donate money to needy person. Because mo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, well, such as, as well as, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1398.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88811188811 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76649786239 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632867132867 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.0184385535 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.2352941176 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8235294118 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.88235294118 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15481623602 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0414132138737 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0446831150827 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0871978519591 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0566801563706 0.056905535591 100% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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