Online classes make conventional classes unnecessary. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
No issue in recent years has drawn as much attention as the debate surrounding online classes and physical classes. It is often argued that virtual classes make traditional classes redundant.
As regard, a fact to support virtual classes is that the matter of overcome time constraint and geographical boundaries is solved. Student can take part in online classes in the comfort of one’s own home or other places. All of the students live in distinct regions whose interactive activity together in web-based classes. For instance, in the pandemic, a wealth of school in the world choose virtual classes instead of learning in conventional classes, giving rise to the fact that all students everywhere can still go to school to interact with online learning so as not to have a knowledge gap. Hence, time issue which they feel satisfied to not have to worry about going to school late. Moreover, online classes give students more flexibility about where to study instead of having to go to school like the traditional.
Ont the other hand, one of point in favour is that improve self-discipline and study costs are limited when learning in the direct form. When learning online, students need to ameliorate their self-discipline because teachers will not know the speed of listening to lectures and understanding students' lessons. Moreover, students only need a laptop or smart phone to study online and it doesn't cost too much to buy books because only the Internet is needed to access all the textbooks and lectures. For demonstrating, from 2019 to 2021 due to social distancing many students limited going out to buy study document, which they can find on the internet platform. Therefore, students are very satisfied with online learning when cutting a lot of unnecessary costs, but teachers and students still have two-way interaction. In addition, students also practice self-discipline skills in a positive way from online classes, making learning more meaningful.
With all mentioned above, i once again reaffirm my position that physical classroom become redudant.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, moreover, so, still, therefore, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1750.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23952095808 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82427230234 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547904191617 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1786490286 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.666666667 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2666666667 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164407249188 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0669436552949 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.074425265999 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113981192222 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100363022869 0.056905535591 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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