Online shopping is increasing significantly.
What effects might be on the environment and the types of jobs which are required for it?
Nowadays buying products from the internet are rising considerably. This can contribute air pollution since the needed transportation relief toxic gas to the atmosphere. On the other hand, this way of shopping has introduced consumers with new job titles such influencers. In this essay, I will explain both questions in detail.
Regards to the former question, the rise of online shopping also boosts the need for a transportation. This is because when online consumers purchase something from the web, they need someone to deliver their product. Usually shipping companies are the responsible ones from deliveries. These companies take the orders from one place and disturb to the purchaser without taking account of the distance between two destinations. Big vehicles which relief carbon dioxide often use as a way of transportation and thus this is resulted with polluting the oxygen that we, citizens are breathing. For instance, in Turkey there are many advanced transportation companies which use not only long-vehicles but also airplanes for transportation in order to deliver everything on time. This means, when the number of online shoppers increase, air pollution is also increase.
However, online shopping also comes with brand new occupations which are not exist before. Considering social media applications such as Instagram, Twitter, and Facebook, they allow brands to reach their target groups easily, accounts with a great number of followers are seeming as ambassadors between brands and their clients. To be able to reach their consumers, many brands usually prefer to use such organic ways as collaborating with influencers. The word of influencer has entered our worlds recently with the rise of social media and it is stands for influencing a great number of people at the same time from social media. For example, if a brand makes a contract with a particular influencer, this influencer might has an obligatory to post pictures with the product for a contract-mentioned period.
To conclude, online purchasing has started to change our shopping habits resulting with air pollution due to the required transportation and creating new online job titles such as influencer.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 855, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'increased'.
Suggestion: increased
...hoppers increase, air pollution is also increase. However, online shopping also comes...
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Line 5, column 78, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'existed'.
Suggestion: existed
...ith brand new occupations which are not exist before. Considering social media applic...
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Line 5, column 269, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...counts with a great number of followers are seeming as ambassadors between brands and their...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, thus, as to, for example, for instance, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1865.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42151162791 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03425854516 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558139534884 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 564.3 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.3352085323 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.705882353 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2352941176 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.52941176471 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152132565408 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.050448712758 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0527605988302 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0999851799887 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0423659423146 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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