Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
A person should never make an important decision alone.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Important decisions are the most crucial ones to make it since these decisions have the power of changing the whole direction of where our lives are heading, they can create big turning points or they can result with huge disappointments. In any case, I do not agree with the given statement. I believe that a person should make an important decision by herself/himself. I will explore my reasons in this essay.
First of all, no one, even the closest family members and best friends cannot know our own genuine intention on regards to one specific topic. Since every individual is extremely unique, calling a vital decision on something would only need to include that person itself. My very own experience on this is a compelling example: When I graduated from my university, I came across with an opportunity of an abroad traineeship in the Netherlands for six months. When I first discussed this new development with my family, they were not on the favouring of the idea of living all alone in another country for that much time. They tried to change my mind about going there, moreover even there were some inside family arguments involved. Although the situation became very unpleasant, I did not listen to them, and I did that internship. When I look back now, I am so glad that I accepted the offer since the experience itself has brought many new opportunities into my life. If I would have listened to my parents, I could not have these new opportunities along with my current master’s degree which is again in the Netherlands that I applied during the time I was doing my internship.
Secondly, involving the others to the decision process when trying to decide on important circumstances can lead a confusion. This is because having more people in the decision process means more ideas and therefore the more confusion. Since people tend to think situation regards their own life and their own desires, they can mislead the others in terms of making a crucial decision. For instance, one of my close friends, she is always depending on the other’s ideas when it comes to making a decision. She has been wanted to get a tattoo for a long time, but she did not sure, what kind of tattoo she would like to have. One of her brothers is highly effective in my friend’s decisions in every aspect of her life. That brother suggested her to get a fox tattoo on her arm, she finally got that tattoo. But after a couple of years, she realized that it was definitely not what she was wanted, following that she has started a removing session which will last for months and not only cost her great amount of money but also pain. If she could make her decision alone, I am pretty sure that she would not have to try to get rid of from the tattoo.
To conclude, I do not agree with the given statement because people need to make their own decision alone since everyone is unique and no one knows better than individual itself and also involving the other’s ideas to the decision process may result with huge regrets.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 977, Rule ID: IF_WOULD_HAVE_VBN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'had listened'?
Suggestion: had listened
...ny new opportunities into my life. If I would have listened to my parents, I could not have these n...
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Line 5, column 430, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
... instance, one of my close friends, she is always depending on the other’s ideas when it comes to m...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, look, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, as to, for instance, kind of, first of all, in any case
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.0286738351 172% => OK
Pronoun: 80.0 43.0788530466 186% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 70.0 52.1666666667 134% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2498.0 1977.66487455 126% => OK
No of words: 535.0 407.700716846 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6691588785 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.80937282943 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5876167275 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 262.0 212.727598566 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.489719626168 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 793.8 618.680645161 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 20.0 9.59856630824 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.5684465055 48.9658058833 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.545454545 100.406767564 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3181818182 20.6045352989 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.36363636364 5.45110844103 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173820562297 0.236089414692 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0587388241551 0.076458572812 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.071881433829 0.0737576698707 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145367734262 0.150856017488 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0880346494969 0.0645574589148 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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