In order to solve traffic problems, governments should tax private car owners heavily and use the money to improve public transportation.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of such a solution?
Traffic congestion in many cities aroung the world is severe. Many people think that government should impose heavy taxes on car drivers and use the money to develop public transport better. However, beside some advantages, this solution also has some drawbacks.
The first benefit is that decreases the number of people owning car because it will become very expensive to drive. This means that traffic jam will be reduced and the number of cars moving on roads will decline, so pollution might be improved. Moreover instead of going by car, they would travel to work by public transport, thus the number of accidents significantly decrease. Another benefit is that government would spend much more money to upgrade public transport. For example, they could buy some new buses and develope traffic systems. Besides that, they could also provide some more facilities such as televisions, air-conditioners to advance the qualities of service, which encourages everyone to use public transport.
Nevertheless, the solution has drawbacks. First of all, this is policy that is not fair. Because it would be a heavy burden on the car drivers and one of them may have no choice and they have to drive car every day to earn money. It would be difficult to live comfortably. Whereas, the rich would not be affected by this policy considerably, they could afford to own many cars they like.
As a result, this solution can improve traffic jam and develop public transport better, but it also has disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, thus, whereas, for example, such as, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1268.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11290322581 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68246403395 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560483870968 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 391.5 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.8966176271 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.5333333333 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5333333333 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191557558119 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0659417036157 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0587493384196 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133529668869 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0471890453345 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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