In order to study at university students are required to pay expensive tuition fees. Not all students can afford them so some people think that university education should be free for everyone. To some extent do you agree or disagree?
Fees for higher education are expensive and non- affordable for everyone so according to some university education should be free for all people regardless their background. I completely agree, that higher education ought to be free as it will greatly benefit both individual and society.
There are several reason why higher education fees should be abolished. Firstly, it gives all people whether poor or rich an equal rights. Many students from poor background are prevented entering to university because they are unable to afford fees, and it excludes the largest proportion of society, so discriminatory should be avoided by getting rid of higher education fees. Secondly, free universities means students will no longer have to study at the same time as study to cover their cost. For example, around 90% of uk students either do full time or part time job while studying in university in order to pay their university fees. Free education therefore, produces the better result as student can able to afford to apply themselves in their studies exclusively.
I believe that free higher education will also benefits the society in long run, for the simple reason that it will open up education opportunities to the wider section of the country. This will result in increasing number of educated people. In other words, having skilled and educated people will greatly rewards the society as a whole. Moreover, it will bring the economic advantages to country that show itself to be prosperous.
In conclusion, free education is a must for all country that values equal rights and one that wishes to advance.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1358.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14393939394 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70342052829 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57196969697 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.905828477 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.461538462 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3076923077 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.76923076923 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.388385249972 0.244688304435 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129007839359 0.084324248473 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0951142750751 0.0667982634062 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216952293332 0.151304729494 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.129163009484 0.056905535591 227% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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