Parents should encourage children spend less time on studying and more time on doing physical activities. To what extent do you agree ?
According to statement, pupils should be guided by parents to provide maximum hours on such tasks which includes physical work instead of spend much attention towards academics. From my prospective, although study plays prominent role yet physical activities also leads to favourable prospective. Couple of views represent balanced equation and are explained in forthcoming paragraphs.
It is worth considering that, academics represent valuable character in present era due to number of prospectives. First and foremost is dominant factor towards career. Because, if pupils provide favourable concentration towards studies in which stream they choose their career. Thus, they become viable to recieve highest scores in high school education which provides convinient manner to get admission in desirable universities. Therefore, this results toward progress of success in career. In addition, another major factor is boosting of informative and knowledgeable skill. Because, such skills also play crucial role in prospective of success. Due to which, pupils become able to represent highest IQ level in all sectors which results to entrepreneurship.
On contrast, physical activities also have number of positive impression beside from academics. Firstly, such physical tasks involve movement of muscles. In this criteria, while doing physical duties, muscles become in contact with force and maximum of pressure which leads to form of exercise. Thus, this make muscles more stronger and flexible results to positive impression on body. Apart from that, such tasks involve outdoor work such as games. Due to which, inhalation of fresh air is done and also provides relaxation from stress and supple to relax the mind. Therefore, this results to favourable aspect for couple of mental and physical growth.
To recapitulate, I personally consider that, although academic represents dominant character due to plenty of valuable manner. Yet, physical activities also reveal important aspect which results to positive progression regards mental and physical health.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'recieve the highest'.
Suggestion: recieve the highest
...eir career. Thus, they become viable to recieve highest scores in high school education which p...
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Line 2, column 580, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...of informative and knowledgeable skill. Because, such skills also play crucial role in ...
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Line 2, column 687, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'represent the highest'.
Suggestion: represent the highest
...ss. Due to which, pupils become able to represent highest IQ level in all sectors which results t...
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Line 3, column 158, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...l tasks involve movement of muscles. In this criteria, while doing physical duties, ...
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Line 3, column 320, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'stronger' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: stronger
...rm of exercise. Thus, this make muscles more stronger and flexible results to positive impres...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, so, therefore, thus, while, apart from, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1761.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.79276315789 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85121097068 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575657894737 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 540.0 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.4814947316 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.05 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.3 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100078859859 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.028578942156 0.084324248473 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.036130598149 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0701457845392 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0407903723887 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.33 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.71 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 307, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'recieve the highest'.
Suggestion: recieve the highest
...eir career. Thus, they become viable to recieve highest scores in high school education which p...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 580, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...of informative and knowledgeable skill. Because, such skills also play crucial role in ...
^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 687, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'represent the highest'.
Suggestion: represent the highest
...ss. Due to which, pupils become able to represent highest IQ level in all sectors which results t...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 158, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...l tasks involve movement of muscles. In this criteria, while doing physical duties, ...
^^^^
Line 3, column 320, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'stronger' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: stronger
...rm of exercise. Thus, this make muscles more stronger and flexible results to positive impres...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, so, therefore, thus, while, apart from, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1761.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.79276315789 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85121097068 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575657894737 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 540.0 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.4814947316 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.05 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.3 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100078859859 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.028578942156 0.084324248473 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.036130598149 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0701457845392 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0407903723887 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.33 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.71 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.