As parts of education, students should spend a period of time living in another country to learn its language and culture. to what extent do you agree or disagree?
In today’s world, there are various ways which students can follow to expand their knowledge. It is acknowledged that students should live in another country in a period of time to learn its language as well as its culture. From my perspective, I remain unconvinced by this statement.
To begin with, the most frequent factor against this claim is that students might face up with the culture shock such as language barriers, foods, strong celebrations and customs, modesty culture like clothing and the way people dress and so forth, which can let them feel disappointed if they cannot overcome these obstacles. Moreover, they might hurt themselves due to myriad negative thoughts. One example to demonstrate this view is that in 2016, a Chinese college student named Zhikai Liu committed suicide after three months studying aboard in Australia. After investigating, police found that the main reason that led to the death of this student is the high pressure of curriculum at school. Besides, he coped with a multitude of difficulties in learning English. Therefore, he was almost unable to confide in or make conversation with people surrounding. These factors resulted in his fatality. As the example reveals, students should not study aboard if they are incapable of getting over the difficulties which they might struggle with.
In addition, one explanation to argue this view is that the expenditure for a student to go aboard for studying is relatively high-priced. This is shown by the following statistics. According to the research by the International Institute of Education, the all-encompassing average cost of studying aboard in a foreign country covers around $18,000 per semester, or $36,000 per full academic year. As a result, a student might be put at the potential risk of confronting with the financial crisis if they do not carefully take this issue into consideration
Given the aforementioned points, it may be concluded that students should not spend time in another country for these purposes because of the dangers brought up above. Hence, I totally disagree with this statement.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...of studying aboard in a foreign country covers around 8,000 per semester, or 6,000 per...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, hence, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, in addition, such as, as a result, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1770.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22123893805 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93637333366 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601769911504 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 535.5 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 87.7133114185 49.4020404114 178% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.625 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1875 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2023363199 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0614152153952 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110802766146 0.0667982634062 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152612441025 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.095768025962 0.056905535591 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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