In the past, people used to travel to see the differences from their home country. However, the sceneries in places around the world seem similar nowadays.
What are the causes of these similarities? Do you think that the advantages of these similarities outweigh the disadvantages?
People have always been passionate about discovering unique culture experience beyond their homeland. Folks used to travel to the foreign countries for learning the peculiar background of the nations but nowadays the boundaries have blurred and the whole globe look alike. This essay will discuss the main causes associated with this phenomenon and explain why to my perspective the drawbacks overweight its positive aspects.
First of all, several factors that foster the trend could be distinguished in modern world. To begin with, modernization facilitates sharing ideas and data among individuals all over the world which creates the similar news and fashion ambience in any part of the planet. Secondly, globalization in economy leads to unification regarding the ration, household wares because people predominantly utilize the goods of the same global corporate monopolists. For example, according to the research agency Mediascope, 79% of respondents prefer to pay for goods and services provided by reliable international holdings rather than by inland producers of no repute. Thus, current day realities create the prerequisites for erasing differences between nations which guides to building a unified community.
This sameness possesses a plethora of disadvantages both for the international association in general and for every land in particular. Above all, this would negatively impact such a booming industry as tourism that boosts the internal economy greatly. From this angle the uniformity of the area could be considered as a flaw. For instance, according to the antiglobalist James Tobin, today a vast majority of tourists are more lean to decide on attending places untouched by humans which helped to preserve the originality. Thereby, the highlighted demerit could not be ignored as it illustrates the need for conservation of the lands’ dissimilitude.
To sum up, the distinctions between countries become finer and subtler due to the globalization and science advancement that only highlights the necessity of protecting the nation’s identity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, regarding, second, secondly, so, thus, as to, for example, for instance, in general, in particular, first of all, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1771.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.67628205128 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09927611058 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.682692307692 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 558.0 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7385892375 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.5 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2857142857 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4285714286 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.086536237573 0.244688304435 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.026139379129 0.084324248473 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0265816237167 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0463189737093 0.151304729494 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0289596326892 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.96 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.0 8.58950901804 128% => OK
difficult_words: 124.0 78.4519038076 158% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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