People are consuming more and more sugar based drinks Why What can be done to reduce sugary drink consumption
The consumption of sugary drinks has significantly increased in recent years. There are a number of reasons why people keep consuming this beverage. This essay aims to discuss them and give some suggestions that would help pose a decline in sugary drinks intake
In terms of the principal reasons behind the dramatic rise in sugar-based drinks, advertising is considered to be the most influential factor. Indeed, advertisers often make exaggerating claims and send persuasive messages to people who are gullible and easily-attracted by sugar-coated words. Sugary drinks are often introduced to give instant energy boost to help people focus more effectively on their work. However, they also cause a drop in energy quickly after consumption so that they have to drink another one to get an extra energy. Moreover, sugar is so addictive that many people find it impossible to quit consuming soft drinks or other sugar-based beverages.
There are several measures that might help reduce sugary drinks intake. One way is to raise public awareness about the drawbacks of these beverages. Drinking large amounts of sugary beverages can increase the risk of gaining weight and developing heart diseases, diabetes, gouts. By organizing campaigns on all media platforms, people would be aware of these problems; therefore; they might change their types of drinks to a healthier balance. Another way is to pose a tax on such products containing high levels of sugar. In this way, people might think twice and reconsider whether or not to buy sugar-based drinks.
In conclusion, advertising and sugar are the most considerable factors that lead to a significant rise in sugary drinks. Despite this, there are many solutions for this problem such as raising the public awareness and posing a tax on these products.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
...people might think twice and reconsider whether or not to buy sugar-based drinks. In conclu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1532.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30103806228 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83453736545 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59169550173 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0401247164 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.133333333 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2666666667 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.375696202436 0.244688304435 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116164355727 0.084324248473 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0731078410224 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201844944415 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0958905106225 0.056905535591 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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